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27 May 2010 @ 03:04 pm
i take it black [drabble]  
title: i take it black
pairing: jaejoong&junsu
rating: g
genre: angst
length: 100 words; drabble
summary: a junsu without jaejoong.
warning: unedited
notes: in junsu's POV; for jaesu_challenge 50 prompts (4. coffee)



///\\\///\\\///\\\

if you could see me now,

stir

you'd be able to see that i can stand on my own two feet.

swirl

i can work out my own songs and sing my own harmonies. i can even make friends almost as well as you do.

sip

you once told me that i would be able to forget you when i drank my coffee black. that i wouldn't feel any more pain or love.

sip

the bitterness is comforting. i don't even cringe. sugar and cream are now superfluous condiments that make me sick.

and yet...

sip

it was a lie.
 
 
 
Shushu_jaesu on May 27th, 2010 10:37 pm (UTC)
Hey, long time no see^^
This is bitter bitter sad.
I imagined Jaejoong as the one speaking till I saw you had Junsu in mind lol
Yes, definitely fits Junsu with his solo project going on. Sounds like his own little revenge or the urge to prove himself. But yet he can't forget his love, Jaejoong huh
젬젬 gemgemmisstellittome on May 27th, 2010 10:38 pm (UTC)
you're back!
i saw that you had been sick. :( hope you're feeling better.

i guess this can be read with any POV in mind. i just thought of junsu when i wrote it :)

thanks for reading!!! ♥
Shushu_jaesu on May 27th, 2010 10:42 pm (UTC)
yes, thank you^^ I feel a lot better ♥
Meena Park!: JaeSuonly4dbsk on May 28th, 2010 12:18 am (UTC)
OMG! i completely LOVE this.
Best portrayal of JaeSu love in such little words ♥
젬젬 gemgemmisstellittome on May 28th, 2010 01:16 am (UTC)
wow thank you :) i'm glad you liked it.

jaesu ♥